Paradise Comments
i hear of the place
from every mouth in my place
even those who never believed
have babbled of the land
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paradise, a place where all the good souls want to end up...beautifly described, a nice imagination. Excellent
an honest desire...aptly written...be careful of the occasional typo...
This poem is great...i really like it a lot. I like the hidden meanings that are with-in it! Keep It UP^^^! ! ! =)
the way you write your poems.. simple yet powerful! i like the word choices.. you really have a gift!
nice. for someone your age you see things differently than i did back then
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7/23/2025 4:20:44 PM # 1.0.0
Simply beautiful or pretty I'm not sure I like this one as well