Thursday, November 10, 2005

Paradise Comments

Rating: 4.8

Some say that self-destruction
Lies just around the corner
I say 'Fair play - that argument
May just prove to be true,
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Jon Lloyd
COMMENTS
June30 Tara 01 February 2007

so true...paradise is indeed me and and you... nice write Tara

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Mary Ali 08 January 2007

This is certinly one happy poem that give you a very optimistic overlook at the world. it's great, i love it.

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Monica Engeler 24 November 2006

I enjoy happy poems. It puts a smiile on my face. Nice poem Monica

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Declan McHenry 15 November 2005

A happy poem! I don't usually go for those myself but a fine sentiment indeed Jon.

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Lucy Burrow 11 November 2005

I'm with you here in paradise! ' Regards, Lucy

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Charles Chaim Wax 10 November 2005

a glorious spot I'd glad you're there happy peaceful presenting this poem for the world to read good work

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