Monday, November 26, 2007

Paradise Comments

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My mind is like a hole,
Empty,
But that was until I met you,
You filled that hole,
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Oscar Aceves
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Evaughn Gray 02 December 2007

wow i like that..i had the image of paradise in my mind..great poem, i give it a 10! ..~hazel

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