Saturday, May 3, 2008

***paradise-12-Fat Man Dies Comments

Rating: 2.9

Maria worked weekends
in a geriatic ward
of another hospital...
her first long time patient
...
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Coach Roth
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Ted Sheridan 17 May 2008

Enjoyed the write even though it was pretty heavy/

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Emancipation Planz 17 May 2008

See your Inbox on this one..

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Lynda Robson 16 May 2008

Poor fat man, this has a certain pathos to it, very well told by you, loved reading this, Lynda xx

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Alison Cassidy 03 May 2008

Love the mix of poignancy and gentle humor you've injected into this one. Your stories never cease to amaze Coach - the dramatic seems to run in your veins. Or is it just that you notice and record... do well. Great poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥

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Abha Sharma 03 May 2008

smooth, touching and breathless...I saw what I read on the screen...Intensive composition...

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