Sunday, October 18, 2020

Paradijsdagen Comments

Rating: 5.0

Kokers in de keuken, koters in de tuin
het is feest in het buitenhuis
samen eten en praten
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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 October 2020

Héél mooi gedicht, schitterend verwoord en tikkeltje ironie kan er wel bij. Prachtig weergegeven! Punten al gegeven in de veraling (of is het originele?)

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 October 2020

I have enjoyed theze mesmerizing poem, truly a poem for the Sunday derived from Mosaic Virus, just the opposite from Corona Virus(?) A gorgeous poem,5 Stars. And to MyPoemList.

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