Saturday, October 7, 2017

Paradigm- 1 Comments

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The smoke at the public place
Uncoils to mix with the smog of the reserved forest.

The current scene on the TV
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Pallab Chaudhury
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Rajnish Manga 07 October 2017

'A sparrow couple copulates; the wind seems careless'. All observed and said by the poet does not give as exact and objective assessment of the situation as the line appearing at the head of these comments.

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Pallab Chaudhury 08 October 2017

Based on your observation, there is a change in the poem. Thank you very much for your valuable comments.

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