Parachutes Comments

I like the rhythm and the rhymes. They fit in without distracting. A powerful way to highlight the fate of the unborn. Well done.

splendid work, andrew. as previous comments reflect, absolutely beautiful. inviting and enveloping, drawing one just close enough to nature's unforgivable aspect. excellent. -Tailor

Andrew, very beautiful poem, it is pleasant to read, I wish you deep a root to England, with difference from dandelions... X-X-X......... Best wishes, Tsira

Is England so pretty in summer? We have dandelions growing wild througout the year, all along the sidewalks. whatever you paint a lovely picture -10 anjali

Excellent poem lines Andrew...especially those of the last stanza...compelling to read again and again...you are throwing up a beautiful philosophic message also inconspicuous behind your beautiful dandelions there...thanks...10

hey this is a cool breezy read indeed, flowery, beautiful write indeed! ! ! liked it very much sir! ! great one to get away from the complexities of the studies! ! ! .. nice 10+++ with love shan

Andrew, I feel like I am floating after reading this glorious poem. What an original title and sensitive emotion it shows and I will always think of dandelions as parachutes from now, and will even tell my grandchild why! 10 Karin Anderson

A lovely composition Andy, the dandelions are so like parachutes, isn't nature wonderful? It reminded me of when we used to blow the seeds, and say one o clock two o clock etc, 10 from me Lynda xxx

Comparison is wonderful in this simple narration! Nice to read!

An amazing ode, I feel airy and light like a dandelion reading it.Perfect flow and delicate emotion all through the verse.These parachutes are floating directly into my favourites :) Thanks for sharing. A.

A beautiful piece Andrew...lovely images...10