Saturday, April 26, 2014

Papyrus Vs Blogs Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don’t be nervous,
Nor do you grieve,
Oh, Bard, soothe,
In life’s destined gloom.
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Tajudeen Shah
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Bri Edwards 01 May 2014

i liked this poem MUCH MORE than 'memory birds'. it is rich with poetic images and with entertaining alliterations, even thought the meaning of this one, also, may not be clear to me; i've only read it once and i'm in a hurry to get to bed. perhaps i shall return to it. thanks for sharing. bri ;) one question before i go: Often did he trample, ............who? is he

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Yash Shinde 29 April 2014

......an interesting and intriguing write....... blogs can't keep the privacy, that you get in papyrus manuscripts.........glad to see that you cherish the past! ...

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 28 April 2014

On the banks of bleeding brooks so richly beautiful!

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Captain Herbert Poetry 27 April 2014

Intetesting poem and nice messages

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Valsa George 27 April 2014

Our emotions inscribed in papyrus leaves are lasting monuments unlike instant blogs.... In this tech age, unfortunately books are replaced by digital techniques...... While the instant blog Maggots do bud And vanish In the fleeting digital rut. So true Tajudeen.... Great lines!

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