Tuesday, August 12, 2008

Papyrus Boat Comments

Rating: 5.0

Float me upon the source of the Nile
Where the sky meets the water
And let me sing...
'Row, Row, little boat
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Fasika Ayalew
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Bursting with beauty. Wow. I really like it. keep writing.10/10

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Sandra Fowler 30 November 2008

Very touching. This is a soul write, gentle, lyrical and quite poignant. I like it very much. Lovely, Fasika. Warm regards, Sandra

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Terryanne Chebet 26 November 2008

Fasika, this is the first poem of yours i am reading..and am off to look for more, I like your style, it's very smooth and tells a story in a beautiful way...

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 October 2008

Lovely and amazing poem. 10+

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Joseph Poewhit 12 August 2008

PAPYRUS - is paper, a world of dream to float upon.

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Indira Renganathan 12 August 2008

Yes.Life's not a dream.You've to be aware of your survival.Good write.Thank you

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Fasika Ayalew

Fasika Ayalew

Ethiopia
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