Saturday, May 10, 2008

Papyrus Comments

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Stripped, hammered, pressed the purposeful papyrus
Unaware of herself a would be goddess..
Saraswathi of this country
Moulded in forms of paper artistry
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Indira Renganathan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 July 2019

A wonderful poem dear madam! My favorite lines: God's unaware of Satan slipped in/Denuding Saraswathi/Stripping out all Her holiness/Cunningly to be reported of dark prints! I am delighted....stay always happy by the bless of almighty God!

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 03 December 2008

very interesting! keep writing! I also sketched a poem about Japanese paper, Tanabata. dear, friend. could you read and comment on my latest poems, such as Fountain of Fearless Fiance, Cascades of Caprices, Mumbai Mourning, and Mata Hari, please? thank you very much.

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