Sunday, August 14, 2011

Pappepee Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pappepee is a bumble bee
who wants to have a honey tree
why? he simply is a lazy bee!
he flew over the sea
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Estrellita Dedel
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Anshul Gupta 19 August 2011

I liked the spontaneity of the poem. It also had an element of child play... Although i would have liked the Pappepee to live on forever with his lady Pappepee, but life is life! :)

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Juan Olivarez 16 August 2011

Nice little poem, sad ending though, a ten.

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Estrellita Dedel

Estrellita Dedel

Davao City, Philippines
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