Wednesday, March 9, 2005

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Rating: 3.5

as she wrote 'i love you' on his Valentine
it cut her with its edges and she took it as a sign

six years later, he's long gone and she disregards
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Rev. Dr. A. Jacob Hassler
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Such a cynic. Such a turn on.

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***** ***** 23 March 2005

This poem speaks volumes with a conservancy of words. Well done.

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Amberlee Carter 16 March 2005

excellent piece...I'd use this one for the big 10

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Poetry Hound 09 March 2005

Nice and edgy. Thanks for not saying everything and letting the reader fill in the blanks.

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