Wednesday, July 18, 2018

Paperboat Comments

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His love got me sailing
But it's made of a paperboat;
Now soggy, dismembered...
Such love - a floating rubbish!
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Melanie Emikohe
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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 July 2018

Melanie, nicely written👍👍👍

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Practicing Poetess 18 July 2018

Melanie, an achingly lovely poem. Perhaps the heart will find the strength to swim for shore.

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Melanie Emiko 19 July 2018

Thanks to you PP.

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Melanie Emikohe

Melanie Emikohe

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