Friday, March 3, 2006

Paperbacks Comments

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With yellowed paper, stiffened ancient glue
my paperbacks are falling into pieces;
without a cover for the things I do
the chance of survival that decreases
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gershon hepner
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Hugh Cobb 03 March 2006

Shalom! Gershon, this is a wonderful metaphor. It works on multiple levels as literal and metaphoric truth. The ending is perfect. Great poem. Warmly, Hugh

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Patricia Gale 03 March 2006

Show goes our lifes with the paperbacks. Delightful write. Patricia

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Gina Onyemaechi 03 March 2006

Hey, Gersh, I particularly like the way the parallels with the human ageing process intensify towards the end. Enjoyably sorrowful reading. Warmest wishes, Gina.

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