Tuesday, October 18, 2011

Paper Heart Comments

Rating: 4.5

I have a paper heart;
it was made with special care
Crafted from a forge,
where a child’s dreams are stored
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Kevin Patrick
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Akhtar Jawad 27 December 2015

A paper heart, a work of art, a nice idea........................................

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 01 November 2011

if only hearts are made of paper, easy to manage, easy in everything but on the other hand, i like my heart as it is hahaha hey kevin such long poems you have your poems are so long, where do you get all your words i haven't done a poem this long ten votes for this poem

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Ashley Bachtel 27 October 2011

Awe... Kevin...: (I like this one but it's really sad. I agree. I think all hearts are made from paper because they are so easy to rip apart...

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