Wednesday, November 11, 2015

Paper Flower Crowns Comments

Rating: 5.0

These matters at hand let them fall, let them stand.
I do not want to bear their weight anymore.
This gravity that shapes our orbit, the tides, the sea.
That my dear is reality enough for you and me.
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Edmund Strolis
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Pamela Sinicrope 11 November 2015

Well...I just LOVED this one! I'm feeling this way myself today. Been a rough one. You painted some beautiful welcoming pictures and also reminded us all to appreciate HOME SWEET HOME and all it has to offer. Dig a moat around your doorstep where so much grief was left.....interesting image there. Does the moat hold the tears or keep them from entering the house...or does it matter? The last line of this poem steals the show....Let's make our crowns of paper flowers and feast on macaroni. This line harkens to childhood when life was centered around home and love; uncomplicated and simple. Well done! You are on a roll.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 November 2015

Very amazingly narrated poem shared here. These matters at hand let them fall, let them stand. Wonderful...10

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