Thursday, September 13, 2012

Paper Boat Dreams Comments

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Right now
the mind is blank,
right now
have an empty heart;
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Saadat Tahir 02 January 2013

Melancholy and hurting lines, smarting eyes tinged with pain and ceaseless suffering. Some times reality of existence flows along stifled lil flows to crash incessant against the maddening din of raging rivers, muddied sullied and pummeled to submissive knots In the best poetic tradition. Done really well. Liked reading

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