Friday, August 28, 2015

Paper Boat And Paper Camel Comments

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I reside in the country of rain
So whenever the sky decides to pour,
I sit by my damp window pane
Pondering why these cloudbursts occur!
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Sanjukta Nag
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Akhtar Jawad 30 August 2015

I reside in the country of rain. I have been to the country of rains, I am aware of it's charms and I have tried to capture it in my poem-In Bengal Sky Is Crazy For The Earth. But my picture is not so beautiful as your picture is.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 August 2015

Wonderful imagery. Thrilling expression with best phraseology having beautiful rhyme. Many thanks dear Sanjukta, proceed ahead.....10

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 August 2015

With nice flow and rhyming it is a beautiful drop. Loved it.

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Sanjukta Nag

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