Wednesday, September 30, 2009

Paper Birds Comments

Rating: 4.8

Our minds have become intimate with words.
We fly together like two paper birds.
Small creeks, big rivers and the mighty sea,
Sustains the lyrics of calligraphy.
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Sandra Fowler
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Pranab K Chakraborty 01 July 2015

Nice short to light the grass with the lamp of sunset. Thanks.

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Kim Barney 01 July 2015

Very well done. Nice flow and rhyme. Congratulations on having it selected as Poem of the Day!

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Bernard Snyder 01 July 2015

This is Very beautiful. I love the flow!

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Michael Brock 07 April 2010

I enjoyed this very much, you have a beautiful way with words and control the flow of it so well thank you Michael

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premji premji 06 January 2010

dear sandraji.................... i too fly like a paper bird along with you.................... the last line.....all lines are marvellous............................ what can i call these intimate word except poetry? love premji

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Nikunj Sharma 29 December 2009

this piece is unimaginable and really stands out as a masterpiece....it goes to my favorites.....

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Eyan Desir 26 November 2009

This works are art indeed.... as if the words could sit on water...

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Rachel Butler 05 November 2009

'Emotion is as beautiful as art' Rachel Ann Butler

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Vinod Kumar 14 October 2009

Beautiful Wings spreading widely over the colourful lands lakes stepies creeks mountainsetc, Marvelous melody, thanks 10++

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Patti Masterman 14 October 2009

I found this poem because Sonya Florentino had written another one about Sandra Fowler by this same title. I really love this and feel most grateful to both Sonya and Sandra. This is some lovely sentiments and a keeper for sure.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 14 October 2009

signs of love beautifully expressed, stunning.....thanks to your deft fingers 10+++

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Will Barber 12 October 2009

A song of friendship, indeed, in an age when few messages go by post. You return to old themes, but this is an extraordinarily beautiful reprise. - Will

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Anand Madhukar 12 October 2009

A mesmerising piece, captivating and enchanting.

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Uriah Hamilton 11 October 2009

To daily write our poems on people's hearts, to enhance the art of being human. As ever, a lovely write.

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Dezire Diaz 11 October 2009

I really love this poem and i really love the last line it just brings peace.

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Lindbergh Hughes 10 October 2009

Very beautiful! ! A great poem...I loved the last line: 'Emotion is as beautiful as the art..'

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Nalini Hebbar 10 October 2009

words, lines, lyrics, poems, emotions...all so well merged in your poem...without theses there is no poem...regards

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T McH 10 October 2009

YOUR words, your words... Oh, Sandra, what a way you have. This is, as ever, completely enchanting. t x

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Jasbir Chatterjee 07 October 2009

Yes, our minds have become intimate with words! Beautifully spinned! I feel lucky to have you as a poet friend!

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Bob Blackwell 06 October 2009

Lovely words fly so lightly from your pen. Emotion is art, without we cannot write or paint as both come from the heart. Your Paper Birds have flown to Africa to fill my heart with joy. Love from your friend Bob

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