Friday, August 22, 2014

Paper And Scissors Comments

Rating: 5.0

Some people go like peanut butter and jam
Able to flow with congenial skill
Others go broke like an old can of Spam
Unmalleable tang with no friends for frill
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Kevin Patrick
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Manonton Dalan 04 December 2015

lovely poem..i like it

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Kaila George 11 September 2014

You had me from the first line my friend...wow.....increadable work...really...loved the last stanza you made me smile....I highly recommend others to read this if I could I would rate several times...its brilliant write.

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Elena Sandu 03 September 2014

How awesome! Thanks to your friend we have now a poem full of depth! Yes indeed the delicious dishes that can be cooked out of the most different ingredients... Naturally we may discover connections in mostly anything...All that we need is to agree with one menu, one task, isn't it? Haha, I also had such challenge to write about a toothbrush, thought I could never do it then just like yours rolled itself out.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 01 September 2014

Like lightning n thunder n u rock paper n scissor, im awed by this sublime sharp wit poem! Very enjoyable to read indeed., with yor 'magical enzymes' to help digest it. Cheers kevin.

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Terry Craddock 22 August 2014

Yes the opening lines of this poem tell well the depths of this poet's skill, wonderful beautiful opening lines and I totally got the intended ending and exact expression mastered in the closing lines Born with the half of the others great mind Divided where objects of inanimate substance But when were together we stimulate an essence Greater than the sum of our limitations We are the master of our dreams creations

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