Papa You Too....Part Ii Comments

continue to wonder and also enjoy, Rejoice at home but not others to annoy, Tease papa always with broad smile

Dark clouds were at horizons ready to invade, Time has come when spade is to be called spade,

Tease we always and ready to employ, But alas! Soon it was to prove to be a decoy,

I continue to wonder and also enjoy, Always rejoice at home and not others annoy, Tease we always and ready to employ, But alas! soon it was to prove to be a

we are only human, and make mistakes, but we try to correct them before its too late. if your father was to have had an affair when you needed him, he was always right there. we can not judge what we do not see that is the harsh reality. i give it a ten for it comes from the heart.

Nice criticism to the action of the father...the love is evident as well! ! ...10

you are a good child!

some apprehensions in mind....10

some doubts in mind for papa...10

little displeasure for daddy....10

anxiety and little anger for father....10

love n anger for father....10

little complain for father's action....10

great worry and anxiety too...10

anxiety and worry from worried daughter....10

real sentiments from daughter....10

it is amusment for daughter....10

worry for daughter and tension....10

That was really long but i enjoyed it.

its a long poem...well written though the best part i picked: I held breath long and wept for while, Papa at home always used to smile, we may loose him but not by a mile in our own home we may live in exile there is this puzzlement..... u used quartets all along only one triplet...the reason or genre is not immediately apparent...may be inadveratntly missed a line in cut and paste but its a nice readable poem cheers