Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Monday, May 4, 2009

Papa You Too....Part Ii Comments

Rating: 5.0

I continue to wonder and also enjoy,
Rejoice at home but not others to annoy,
Tease papa always with broad smile
Soon it was to prove deception for while
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Ketan Rajgor 22 October 2009

continue to wonder and also enjoy, Rejoice at home but not others to annoy, Tease papa always with broad smile

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Ramdulari Sinha 18 October 2009

Dark clouds were at horizons ready to invade, Time has come when spade is to be called spade,

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Sita Kesri 18 October 2009

Tease we always and ready to employ, But alas! Soon it was to prove to be a decoy,

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G Kandoi 17 September 2009

I continue to wonder and also enjoy, Always rejoice at home and not others annoy, Tease we always and ready to employ, But alas! soon it was to prove to be a

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Louis Rams 12 September 2009

we are only human, and make mistakes, but we try to correct them before its too late. if your father was to have had an affair when you needed him, he was always right there. we can not judge what we do not see that is the harsh reality. i give it a ten for it comes from the heart.

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Merna Ibrahim 30 August 2009

Nice criticism to the action of the father...the love is evident as well! ! ...10

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 29 August 2009

you are a good child!

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Kamli Kamal 19 August 2009

some apprehensions in mind....10

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Saroj Davde 19 August 2009

some doubts in mind for papa...10

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Santoksingh Jadeja 15 August 2009

little displeasure for daddy....10

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Chaul Vania 11 August 2009

anxiety and little anger for father....10

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Suresh Vakil 11 August 2009

love n anger for father....10

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Durga Sethani 10 August 2009

little complain for father's action....10

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Argum Sheth 10 August 2009

great worry and anxiety too...10

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Kant Shri 09 August 2009

anxiety and worry from worried daughter....10

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Ratna Patel 07 August 2009

real sentiments from daughter....10

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Sonu Dhanraj 06 August 2009

it is amusment for daughter....10

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Jayant Manik 06 August 2009

worry for daughter and tension....10

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M.j. Daniels 02 August 2009

That was really long but i enjoyed it.

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Saadat Tahir 29 July 2009

its a long poem...well written though the best part i picked: I held breath long and wept for while, Papa at home always used to smile, we may loose him but not by a mile in our own home we may live in exile there is this puzzlement..... u used quartets all along only one triplet...the reason or genre is not immediately apparent...may be inadveratntly missed a line in cut and paste but its a nice readable poem cheers

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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