Saturday, November 8, 2008

Papa's Hand Comments

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The water chills my legs and feet.
But Papa's hand fills my heart with heat.
The waters are scary and swifted,
but Papa's hand keeps me lifted.
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Alyssa Marquardt
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Norine Blankenship 27 November 2008

This poem is accually about my father. I feel Alyssa has spoken the true essents of my dad. For a girl so young, she has the talent of poets much greater in age. Her writings are so worldly, so wise, I hope she has seen a mere bit of this through my eyes. Best wishes my dear...you are truely talented and gifted. Love Aunt Nini

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Mary Murphy 08 November 2008

Aw I love this! Good Job!

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Alyssa Marquardt

Alyssa Marquardt

eureka california
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