Papa Do You Know? Comments

I love this peom..its ten times better than mine. (: mine is really short.

Very nice narration of once moving tale. Well drafted.

wow..its seems as iif u wrote this poem as to sort of tease ur father...in sum parts it seems as if u were bein nice and complementing your father..and then taking the rug from right up under him..do u follow...excellent write

Tease papa always with broad smile Soon it was to prove deception for while

Do you know papa? ' How much I love you as Kid?

Mom gave me all happiness of life, Not looked beautiful but stayed as your wife, Life not easy for her but an edge of

Do you know papa? ' How much I love you as Kid? I am on earth but have no such lid, How to express words but make strong bid,

a very emotional write to your papa. everything put into perspective.

thank yuo very much you let me know about this your poem. it's very beautiful

Perfect poem, poet and rhyme! ! ! ! ! ! the poem is so real and yes the life is too hard and painful without a father.... 10+++

it's nice when you do not just show the misfortunes but also the love and respect. very well penned!

Wonderfully written and expressed. I loved the sentiment. You did great on this one my friend. BRAVO! 10++++ laurel

complaint from daughter to papa....10

so much affection and feelings to papa...10

so much attachment to daddy....10

very affectionate question to dad...10

The best tribute given to papa by his son.

visible love for father....10

daughter's love for dad....10

great feelings for father....10