Papa Comments

Fathers are a significant part of life. Nothing compares to a good dad. And we should appreciate them. Thanks for the reminder.

Bohat Sukriya Saadat

A befitting ode to a personality shaped by the LORD HIMSELF... lovely ardent and deeply felt lines. parental love and guidance are indeed a great blessings, those of us without it now....know! liked it

love filial remembers to cry of father life when molded by his engraved pattern each breath of his words guides to go oh where is the life yet lost to mystery of his memory, wonderful tribute father by a daughter,10+++, thanks for sharing

thanks Rm. shamugam :)

good; the last line touching

Thanks key :) I like that. As life phases change Is bad grammar. I am ocd when it comes to the rhyming, and adjust with sort of schizophrenic form of reading. :)) : p [3

A travel to new enchant we must travel through, an emotional sail through the tide. As it may be hard feelings for us to arrange, the proof he was there with us is in the tears he's cried. As he will never leave us, we shall never stray our first love, our Father.