Pantoum For A Camping Trip Comments

SOOOOO, you were the one next to us that night who kept shouting, 'Would you please shut of that blender and go to bed? ? ? ? ? ! ! ! ' Very funny.

the repetitions were similar to what you did the other day on 'circular logic' but i felt that this worked much better. this combines some of the best aspects of your work.

Man, you make me want to take up camping! : -) I think the form you use is great for the subject matter! I enjoyed the poem enormously, you have a great sense of humor. (Or at least, one like mine!) Isn't that something...how you can create such an enjoyable poem out of such a hellish experience!

The repetitions make it even more fun...! Have more trips like this, hurhur!