Panoramic Comments

I find this rather beautiful, a sacred, living memorial to a passion that is really worth holding in your being. There's no regret here! (no salt of regret in the red margarita of your memory, I thought, not a very good line, maybe) Lines like 'cause and effect of astonishing sunsets' and 'rented hours borrowed against...' say a lot in a few words and I admire them. The title's good too. I find it almost a perfect piece, supple, with the energy of the whole in every line.