Monday, May 20, 2019

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I follow the dying star to the awaiting place


Striding through the motion between time & space
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Fantone Mdala
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Bharati Nayak 28 May 2019

I follow the dying star to the awaiting place Striding through the motion between time & space A recurring moment I relive day in & day out Trailing to the edge of the earth - - - - - - A fantastic poem of nature.Every line is beautiful.

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 May 2019

Dear Fantone Mdala! I felt great beauty of nature in this poem. I liked the verse most, Where the earth passionately kisses the sky A wardrobe where the day changes into night. Thanks.

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Fantone Mdala 22 May 2019

Am so honored with your intricate complement Jazib. It means a lot and I'll take it as form of motivation to me. Thanks for the support

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