Tuesday, October 30, 2012

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Rating: 4.7

In the midst of night,
I witnessed soft light,
Astonished I gazed around,
The sky, stars and the ground,
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Jahan Zeb
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Maria Young 14 November 2012

A magnificent picture. Loved it

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Poetheart Morgan 09 November 2012

what a fight trying to keep the balance in your life and searching the insidious love, that same love that can hurt you and turn you undone. Beautiful.

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Amanda Laurent 31 October 2012

You've captured a magical moment, and this poem has such a sweet ending. So great!

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Stevie Taite 31 October 2012

The light of your life, literally! Right there beside you!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 31 October 2012

Dreamlike phase expressed superb poetically with a romantic ending. Lovd d poem.

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Hazel Durham 30 October 2012

Just perfect, so beautifully written with lovely rhythm and flow, loved this poem! !

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Poetheart Morgan 30 October 2012

So love in your heart but battle in your mind. Surrender yourself Poet! Swimming against the tide

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Jahan Zeb

Jahan Zeb

Malakand Pakistan
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