Pankh Hote To Main Udd Jati...* Comments

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ati sundar.... sach kahata hun... is kavita ko padhte huye, bich men ruk kar comment kar raha hu, adwitiya(jiske saman koi nahin..) . yah kavita behad hi marmik aru dil ki gahrayi se nikli huyi, punah(fir se) : dil ki gahrayi me utar jati hai... Kavi/kavitri- -]pathak) . bahut hi lajawab likha hai aapne, kavita, Kavita g 10+++

ati sundar.... sach kahata hun... is kavita ko padhte huye, bich men ruk kar comment kar raha hu, adwitiya(jiske saman koi nahin..) . yah kavita behad hi marmik aru dil ki gahrayi se nikli huyi, punah(fir se) : dil ki gahrayi me utar jati hai... Kavi/kavitri- -]pathak) . bahut hi lajawab likha hai aapne, kavita, Kavita g

Hi Kavita, Sapnon ke pankhom me uddne aapki khwaayish padha mein ne is kavita mein. Na paane ki khushee Na khone ka darr Loved reading. A full 10++