Thursday, February 4, 2010

Panic Comments

Rating: 4.5

It’s the smallest things about you my friend…
The most inane jesters..
There
Like Nubian royalty
...
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DeAnna Esquilin
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Shauna Barnett 02 June 2011

@ Tiffanie - I think it says friend, because it is about a woman talking to her female friend who has cancer. Anyway, I like your poem. It has great imagery, and your diction allows me to connect to it emotionally, even though I have never had someone close to me suffer from cancer.

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Brenda Arroyo 11 March 2010

This is lovely. frank. but lovely. My prayers go out to your friend.

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Tiffanie Drayton 04 February 2010

This poem is beautiful, but I don't understand why the person is just a friend. The woman being spoken to seemed more like a wife. It should have just ended with ' Until now'.

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DeAnna Esquilin

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