Paltry Pitfall Comments

Pitfalls, paltry to begin with bu grow and are no more paltry. Yes, one need be wary of them, well said.

This is truly a lovely poem that I love at each moment to read again and again.

picture of Angel mia LOVE xAdorable and so true tfs blessings dear xoxoxo 15 Jul 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of Kantanka Addo- Osafo xi like your last line. good rhyming 15 Jul 2015 by Kantanka Addo- Osafo | Reply picture of Mfena Ortswen xReally nice. I like it. 15 Jul 2015 by Mfena Ortswen | Reply picture of Sylvia Frances Chan xAbsolutely right. Thank you for your wise advice and thank you for sharing this pedagogic poem. There is oft something to be learned. 17 Jul 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply picture of Nikunj Sharma xthe importance of doing one's karma and making use of even the adverse circumstance to one's advantage is the essence of the journey of life.... i like it 18 Jul 2015 by Nikunj Sharma | Reply picture of Rohan ******* xthis is beautiful sir.... 19 Jul 2015 by Rohan ******* | Reply picture of Drake Banner xReally great, it's full of truth. 27 Jul 2015 by Drake Banner | Reply

i say thanks then i pray and ask what can i do?

great write deserving 10

Great advice. Love this bright refreshing write. I am feeling the pitfall at present.

In their progress they have split! Along the ways of the muse of life. Nice work.

Truly said, life is subjected to pitfalls but the road IS not the same, it's up down and straight subjected to change.Loved reading the poem

There is much truth in your poem. At times we all get bored and frustrated with our jobs, but we must persist. There are many reasons to keep going - feeding our families, maintaining a proper place to live, children's education. These are good reasons and give us the motivation we need. You express it all so well in this inspiring poem.

A nicely written and insightful poem