Monday, December 14, 2020

Palm Of Your Hands Comments

Rating: 4.3

With one's birth
Their life is held
In the palm of two hands
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Lyn Paul
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Deluke Muwanigwa 03 January 2021

I know exactly what you mean. I experienced anguish and do not wish it on any kid. Great poem

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David Wood 02 January 2021

Inspirational and powerful a 5* poem. Happy New Year

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Khairul Ahsan 21 December 2020

'Your hurdles Enriched you To see' - With every hurdle crossed successfully, we enich ourselves with a priceless wisdom. Loved your poem, Lyn.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 December 2020

Another powerful and inspiring poem from the pen of a Poetess who has a big heart for humanity. A poem of love and hope.. A very thoughtful write. Beautifully crafted and conveyed. Five Stars! ! !

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 16 December 2020

Your poem expresses beautiful truths on the dignity and worth of every human being. Wonderfully well written!

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Shaun Cronick 15 December 2020

A more than well written poem with the great virtue of hope skilfully woven in. Hope for oneself, each other and their futures. It reminds me of another superb poem of hope and game plan for life, Max Ehrmann's Desiderata. Maybe inspired by. Thank you Lyn Paul for writing and sharing. Five shining stars and enjoy life and all the good and great virtue's it can bestow.

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 December 2020

You are no less Of a human being Then, any other ~ yeah, right; excellent motivational poem shared

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Rajnish Manga 14 December 2020

This is an outstanding poem on the subject of hope, quite inspiring that celebrates a man's inherent strength to fight adversities and be a winner. Thanks.

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Kostas Lagos 14 December 2020

Wonderful poem Lyn. Thanks for posting

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