Friday, June 21, 2013

Palette Comments

Rating: 5.0

Remember the moments we shared
Stories we retold
Poems we recited together
Were of friendly in nature
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sekharan pookkat
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Aniruddha Pathak 18 May 2019

Memories, one way to know life is alive. They make life's palette. Beautifully penned.

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Ging Taping 18 May 2015

Ohhh how sad: (I can feel your pain., Love is not always a happy ending..perhaps a start of a new beginning

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Bharati Nayak 14 May 2015

Memories pleasant and painful. On the canvas there is a colorful sketch.this beautiful write.

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Neela Nath Das 06 October 2013

Now it's your turn to color the past memories! Awesome!

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Beach Girl 25 September 2013

That was so beautiful and sad. Loved your poem. Gave it an excellent!

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 19 September 2013

I see the beauty of every word, but I cannot find the place to vote. You already have 10, is there any more vote possibilities?

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Sekharan Pookkat 17 September 2013

share this poem and vote for this poem

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 09 July 2013

The best is to keep the good memories, but funny, I remember always the bad part. I can imagine that is why I rather be alone and love myself, this way nobody argues with me and we do not have to have the thorns. Finding many hobbies, what we like to do, get busy and forget the wish to have someone else beside us. In this world man and woman did not get to real love yet. Long time ago man ruled, lately woman wants to rule and getting stronger, but the time (I do not think it comes in our time) will come when they will find true understanding and live happily ever after.

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Anamika Jalan 04 July 2013

rhythemic and great one touches my heart really

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Farah Ilyas 01 July 2013

A poem of memories, with the expression at last, A Pallette in my hand..wao what a use of expression, leaving behind any one empty handed with pot so that he /she with the hop[e that he /she vl fill it with the time we spent together, with the motion of time this spending time vl turn into memories..ah beautiful poem is here..great Sekhran

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Poetheart Morgan 29 June 2013

I forgot to say, that poem is very beautiful and full of love.

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A sound poem of tears; it needs re-editing too.

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Payal Parande 26 June 2013

Take care of all your memories. For you cannot relive them. a beautiful write with beautiful feelings i am speechless............

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Poetheart Morgan 22 June 2013

In a poetical way you crave for someone that you loved so much. You want all this love back to you. But she gone away, she is away from you and you are painting in black and white. That are the colors of your palette! ! ! Your words! ! Sad poem i hope she listen you.

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 22 June 2013

Sad. A well written poem, keep it up!

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Vishal Sharma 22 June 2013

lost memories are never regaine great write with a touch of perfection what else is needed now

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