Pale Light Comments

Finely written the fact! impressive wording! 10+

Today.. I found a key.. to open this gate, to see the blind sky fade dimly and reach shade. Slowly.. The light collapsed my vision but I'm still standing.. facing collision................................. eternity yet awes by the gleams of light vision never fails by light even in collision, ..................wonderful metaphors and imagery, eyes look to wonder and lays back for a while redeeming the vision, ingenious introspective by the life yet of unique genre, mingling in the waves of passion where mind ewes by words of wisdom,10++++, thanks for sharing

Dear poet friend...I'm so proud to be the 1st to vote on this work of art! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! But seems to me you are so melancholic like me! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Cheer up girl, you are still young...life is just beginning...10+ from me...bye