Tuesday, February 27, 2018

Pale Comments

Rating: 5.0

She looked so pale.
Because their love had grown stale.
She just wanted to set sail.
And look at the big blue sea and killer whales.
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Lamar Cole
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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 February 2018

The enjoyable moment when they first met has been touchingly expressed. Beautiful poem.

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Rini. 27 February 2018

As Robert said this occurs a lot and there are many around us..Good one

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Bernard F. Asuncion 27 February 2018

Lamar, such a well expressed poem👍👍👍

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Practicing Poetess 27 February 2018

My advice to her: So, put on some makeup, Chica (to camouflage the 'pale') , go on a cruise where you'll have your big blue sea, and maybe you'll meet a nice new guy on the cruise! Obviously well-written, Lamar, if I'm giving advice to imaginary characters! :)

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