Saturday, September 10, 2016

Palanquin Comments

Rating: 5.0

The child though mild
not then so wild,
when saw a palanquin,
and inside a queen,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rajnish Manga 10 September 2016

Sweet and lovely like lullaby or a nursery rhyme. The imagery and the narrative is captivating which unfolds a study in child psychology. Thanks for sharing.

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Akhtar Jawad 10 September 2016

Rajnish Ji, it's a true story of me and my mother.

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Kelly Kurt 10 September 2016

Very lovely, Akhtar. A sweet tale told to a child. If a moon fairy ever comes to me, I shall treat her as a queen

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