Wednesday, December 7, 2016

Pal Of My Cradle Days Comments

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Pal of My Cradle Days

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Annette Aitken
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Terry Craddock 10 January 2017

'I thought I'd put it down in words how much you mean to me I never said these words enough the way it should have been I love you oh, so very much I have you in my heart I keep you in that special place for when we are apart' loved the title loved the theme, appreciating friends should be an esteemed art form, good friends are beautiful

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Tom Billsborough 16 December 2016

This is a beautiful celebration of a mother's love. A very fine poem indeed. Well done, Anna

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Bri Edwards 14 December 2016

favorite lines: filled with joy and laughter you always read the stories with the happy ever after and life is sad without you, althought you have not gone Your in the land of Alzheimers, where no one should belong. a fine tribute. i suppose it eases your mind a bit to write this. i'm confused; is she alive or dead. i mean really dead, though real death may be better than what first took her. again, not what i was looking for in #69, but a lovely poem anyway. bri ;) thanks for the Poet's Notes! to MyPoemList

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Seamus O Brian 13 December 2016

This is a deeply stirring tribute, very finely penned. The cadence and rhyme artfully done to enhance the solemn depth of the piece. Again, a beautiful tribute, so candidly yet lyrically expressed. A piece to treasure along with every memory.

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Bill Cantrell 08 December 2016

Expressing our emotions is to touch the spirit and your poem has touched me. Now when I hear it's a wonderful world...I will think of your poem in addition to the lyrics.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 December 2016

Nice dedication! May her soul rest in peace. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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