The soil of Pakistan has always been fertile
Well-built and laborious men and their sweat
Born soldiers with love in their depths
It's a land green with crops of cotton and wheat.
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Love has depth with green scene of the land that is very affectionate and we hear wonderful story of love. Crops changing colours ripe and give us beautiful message. A nice poem is chosen as the poem of the day and we congratulate you for your achievement for getting a place in front page of PH. Rating..10
A lovely poem! Great patriotism is reflected in this amazing write! Congratulations for this fabulous poem being chosen as POD!
A wonderful tribute to your country...congregations for poem of the day!
My twin resembles so like my country too. Beautiful tribute to Pakistan. Land of sufi saints land of love. loved reading every bit of it.
A wonderful poem from a great poet. A great tribute to Pakistan. Thank you, Akhtar for taking us to your beloved Motherland. Congratulations !
Every land has its own flame of love, waters drawn up from deep wells makes a culture sacred and prized, I see pakastan as a rich land of passion in your poem, hate and love are side by side but it is love that wins, a great poem!
Congrats, Akhtar Sahab. We belong to a land which is known for supreme sacrifices by legendary lovers to uphold the values of true love. They lifted the level of their love to that of Godliness. Thanks a lot.
The stories of love and hate run side by side A single Kaido is always here to poison the love Millions like Ranjha who knowingly take poison If dead with the poison is Heer the beloved dove! - - - - - - -Such a lovely poem about your motherland., The last stanza is particularly meaningful.It is how there are wicked people who poison the loving relationship between people and people, It is nice to see love and patriotic feelings about your country as it is suffused with humanism.
This is a beautiful poem, but I didn't like the military part. Poetry and bullets should always remain opposite to each other. Military is the greatest necessary evil of modern civilization. And it should be treated as so, and one should not be proud of it. Om Shanti.
With crops of cotton and wheat! ! Pakistan. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Here is the link to my poem about India my motherland. ‘ From Delhi To Kanyakumari’ for Ph and for you Akhtarji.
Reading this poem an emotion took me over and I felt like saying.....this land is your land and this land is my land. A wedge is created now but roots of love and affection go deeper. Congratulations Akhtarji for a lovely poem.
Sounds patriotism, well done, congrats and thank you for sharing the poem with us
A heart-felt tribute to your country. Excellent write. Akhtar, Congratulations on a well deserved Poem Of The Day!
a wonderful poem of a land much loved by the poet? ...……….well penned Akhtar
a mystic nexus between lover and beloved is blended - Millions like Ranjha who knowingly take poison If dead with the poison is Heer the beloved dove! 10++++++++
Wonderful tribute to your country..Congratulations for poem of the day
Akhtar, such a well crafted poem of the day.... congrats for being chosen....10++++
A wonderful tribute to a wonderful country