Wednesday, April 3, 2019

Pakistan (Happy Birthday To My Granddaughter Zaufishan) Comments

Rating: 5.0

What surprises you my dear granddaughter?
Is it a desert, a forest or the green meadows?
Remains of snowfall or music of the fall of water?
You see something wonderful through the windows!
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 April 2019

The picture that goes with this great poem is wonderful. A lovely child. She is blessed for having a.great grandfather who can inculcate in her, at a tender age the love.and.duty to one's country. I am sure, the granddaughter will make him proud.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 April 2019

THe great Poet showed in this write that his love for his country and family has no bounds. A great man. A great family man. A great citizen of Pakistan. Loved this write. 10++++++++× And.to my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 April 2019

The wonderful attributes of Pakistan have been beautifully conveyed and the flaw of the government. The last two stanzas consist of powerful lines invoking the love and duty to one's country.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 April 2019

A wonderful, patriotic, insightful and touching write. I liked how the great Poet weave this marvelous poem. The love for country and the love of a granddaughter are vividly and brilliantly depicted.

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