Saturday, June 15, 2013

Pak / India Odi Comments

Rating: 4.3

The old Rivals face to face
Each resolved to win the match
Battle-ground from start on fire
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Shahzia Batool
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Sun Shine 27 July 2013

Experience has shown how deeply the seeds of war are still present in the cricket ground... The pressure people put on themselves and the rivalry between the teams is much more marked. And I think that's a good thing. As long as that rivalry remains within the spirit of competition, it con only spur everyone on. maza agya! !

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 June 2013

Hope for the best love and unity from any side

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Kavya . 17 June 2013

hey good one...yes as u have rightly said the india pak ODI matches are givn special significance....yes n the heartbeats rise while watching the play...very aptly described in this poem...the last 2 lines are highly captivating

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R.k Das 17 June 2013

'so beautifully words in this poem play In Pak/India ODI ''' a poetess like shahzia can can play words, spin words, fastbowl words, short pitch words, googly words, out swing words, inswing words, , square cut words, , helicaptor words, , hook words, , i enjoyed the poem thoroughly and attested the message totally, , , i was all smiles as i was reading the poem and shared this poem with some cricket lovers, , , , , , and will show the concluding lines to cricket fanatics, , am in a 'poetic fix'........ how to rate this poem, , usually i do not rate works of art, , , have never done so far, , but here i give the poem hunter poetess of the match to shahzia,10 ++++++++++++

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Indira Babbellapati 15 June 2013

I liked the refrain that added to the spirit of the poem :)

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Xelam Kan™ 15 June 2013

Hahahahahaha. Great.....you must be a commentator I m sure will far better than Rameez and Waseem

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Ramesh Rai 15 June 2013

My one request to all friends Neither take the match as battle Nor the case of life and death though i dont hv interest for cricket but i agree with your advice

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Wahab Abdul 15 June 2013

nice one and very interesting though in these days i do not see creekit, a poor man's disease..

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Passionate Reader 15 June 2013

I’m thrilled to read this poem. Every line is so interesting. This is one of my favourite topics as I love to watch Pak/India matches. A wicket falls, here souls fly In Pak/India ODI So true and lovely! ! ! ! ! ! ! The ending is apt and again with a meaningful important message that we should just relax and enjoy the game. Superb! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! yes you are right the situation will never change! ! ! :)

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Yasmin Khan 15 June 2013

oooooo! what a picture you have drawn Shahzia! I'm speechless, you take me directly to the ground and make me 'see' and 'feel' everything. It's witty and intelligent description. I just ask about the score from kids so share your advice to others: 'no need to crane the necks and set b.p. on high just enjoy it's not a battlefield.' Your diverse genius is appreciable.10/10 (Ph code is too affected by match syndrome) :))

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Payal Parande 15 June 2013

you know in my opinion games played on national level are for entertainment and for taking your mind off your regular problem and not to create problem for your country .....so thank you for putting this in front of us in beautiful manner.....and yes just enjoy those bunch of guys playing with wooden stick and rubber ball and remember that is all it is.... thank you for sharing ma'am

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