Tuesday, July 21, 2020

Painting! Painting! Painting! Comments

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Painting! Painting! Painting!
I am forever wretchedly painting!
It's what I do away from work,
For a household needs maintaining.
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Shaun Cronick
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Dominic Windram 22 July 2020

Great poem Shaun on the discontents of D.I.Y. I really like the imagery you deploy to describe the colour white and then there's the wonderful acerbic wit running through it. What's not to like? Anyway, it's a titantic tin of white paint inspired 10 from me!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 July 2020

Wonderful, wonderful poem. The brilliant Poet has indeed a great way with words and he can always think of a theme that can entertain and inform a reader. Brilliantly crafted and presented. Very entertaining with a tinge of humor. To my Poem List.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 21 July 2020

Nice and truthful. Painting painting painting Fainting fainting fainting The smell of thinners for sinners Panting panting panting Not enough air down the stair Not enough light in sight To see the hues and colours Painting painting painting Panting panting panting Lol.....sorry to mess your flow (floor with paint) ...

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