Sky is the canvas and cloud is oil,
Like fresh oil is brought up
From newly harvested castor seeds,
This oil is drawn from white clouds,
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You have painted the dusk very nicely. I get a clear picture from this poem and feel the natural happening.
A golden sparrow's flight is witnessed, As sun is returning back to nest wonderful imagery Kumaramaniji. Thanks....10
Sky is the canvas and cloud is oil, uh what a nice toil to begin the royal dusk..
Amazing imagination! Beautiful poem! A fabulous painting in words! Full marks!
Wild-date-palm tree is the brush, Heart of Earth is painted by grass...Wonderful poetic imagination! A beautiful poem sir...thanks for sharing! (10)
nature is always beautiful may be the clay, dust, mud, .......... a very interesting poem, thanks for sharing
a wonderful descripted poem of nature's beauty alive and well? ...................well penned KM
The beauty of nature has been painted on the canvas of this marvelous poem. A great write with compelling imagery. Yes, God's creations are full of wonders.10
A lovely poem. I go out to enjoy the sunset and dusk as often as I can.
Spring! ! Signal to live. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Sir, it's magnificent portrait of dusk!