Sunday, May 13, 2018

Painting Of Dusk Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sky is the canvas and cloud is oil,
Like fresh oil is brought up
From newly harvested castor seeds,
This oil is drawn from white clouds,
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 December 2021

Sir, it's magnificent portrait of dusk!

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Dogma Daniman 03 July 2020

You have painted the dusk very nicely. I get a clear picture from this poem and feel the natural happening.

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A golden sparrow's flight is witnessed, As sun is returning back to nest wonderful imagery Kumaramaniji. Thanks....10

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Kostas Lagos 26 May 2018

Beautiful, imaginative poem!

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Rus Mer 17 May 2018

Sky is the canvas and cloud is oil, uh what a nice toil to begin the royal dusk..

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Valsa George 16 May 2018

Amazing imagination! Beautiful poem! A fabulous painting in words! Full marks!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 May 2018

Wild-date-palm tree is the brush, Heart of Earth is painted by grass...Wonderful poetic imagination! A beautiful poem sir...thanks for sharing! (10)

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Muzahidul Reza 14 May 2018

nature is always beautiful may be the clay, dust, mud, .......... a very interesting poem, thanks for sharing

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Tom Allport 14 May 2018

a wonderful descripted poem of nature's beauty alive and well? ...................well penned KM

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The beauty of nature has been painted on the canvas of this marvelous poem. A great write with compelling imagery. Yes, God's creations are full of wonders.10

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Rini Shibu 13 May 2018

Beautifully penned nature poem..nice imagery

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Kelly Kurt 13 May 2018

A lovely poem. I go out to enjoy the sunset and dusk as often as I can.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 May 2018

Spring! ! Signal to live. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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