Friday, October 13, 2017

Painting My Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

From the ocean of experience
In life's subconscious stream
In the stillness of the silence
Drifting deeper in the dream
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Chris Embrick
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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 October 2017

In the stillness of the silence, on life's subconscious stream from the ocean of experience you have slowly expressed a beautiful imagery in this poem that motivates mind of a reader. You have brilliantly placed wall of memories hanging with your other dreams. Colors for the scheme is found in subconscious mind with dream and sunrise. Emotion is glowing with excellently drafted poem.10

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