Painting Dove With White Wings Comments

What a painting it would be if paint a dove with white wings and a branch of olive in her nib. World needs peace.

Terrific poem, Soul. How fleeting are things such as the calmed waters? The dove taking flight? They serve as powerful reminders that what we need, how we develop, and what is so vital, is fleeting. Learning, developing and growing are endless processes, punctuated by moments of calm. A great, thoughtful poem.

It is a beautiful philosophical poem havinng an eloquent depiction with an amusing and touching beginning. I quote... Drops of the rain Wont erase my reflection on the water When water find calm, i could see me again Drops of my tears Cant erase you from me When heart calms, i found you in me again Sometimes we are challenged by time Still also time knows how to heal ... ofcourse sometimes we are challenged by time. Beutifully crafted and amazingly shared. Thanks.

A spiritually uplifting poem. I love the image of a painted white dove in your poem which gives a sense of peace, well-being and confidence in spirit...10+

Life! ! ! Learning along the way. Thanks for sharing.

Always fly high and free my good friend on the white wings of the dove.

beautiful and touchy every lines so alive really love it great one thanks for sharing

simple simile.. from your bio....simple similes i may not know, but simple smiles i will show. speaking of smiles........i especially enjoyed: Falling tears that leaving from me May shake my reflection on the water But when the surface is calming soon I'll see my face be smiling again For my eyes, fingers will wipe For me, heart will be cared ....but did you mean to write cared or cured? maybe cared for? and i liked the flower arrangement you drew on your poet's page....i can almost smell them now! thanks for sharing. :) bri

Beautiful lines. Your write is really amazing. I loved all the stanzas...

Excellent lines! ! ! ! Drops of the rain Wont erase my reflection on the water When water find calm, i could see me again Drops of my tears Cant erase you from me When heart calms, i found you in me again

Just the emotion in everyword that you write Soul is truly amazing. A very talented young man you are.

A good account of things that require many mouths to speak... A fine tribute to all including yourself dear Soul...

The white dove symbolises peace, something we all strive for. A lovely poem Soul.

loving the painting of the thinking dancer

Finding oneself... finding the extent to which one can fly is the greatest knowledge. You wish to soar into the world like a dove on wings! A dove symbolizes peace. When you are at peace with yourself, you have achieved bliss. A wonderful opening to the poem... enjoyed the first three lines the most!

Wonder! a lovely masterpiece. I read it three times. I would love to read it again.

Wow, Soul, this is a masterpiece. so much meaning, so artistically expressed. Our hearts are often troubled by the ripples on the lake on stormy days, blurring our eyes. The white dove in our soul is temporary nowhere to be found, but then when calm wheather returns we can see clear again, the dove, the secrets in the sky, ... Such a rich poem, truly heart warming,

thnx my dearest for coming back. you hv to touch the sky. life is long n u hv to do a lot. i do nt hanker for any matter in my personal life. generally i like to avoid participation in any contest. i did. i never expected such b'ful result in my favor even it was our commitment if selected within 100we will think we r fit for poetry. unfortunately u were out in first round but does not mean that ur pen was inferior. i read almost all poems n commented too upto late night even upto 2am despite of my restless duty thro out day as well as discharging my all job. i observed most of the poems were outstanding including urs. it is only the love affection best wishes and blessing i reached to the top.. keep writing my frnd. thnx best wishes n regards ramesg rai

Very beautiful poem..please read mine called ''Feathered Tears

inspiring one. the souls take flight to the world which is invisible.but when they arrive they are sure that they settle down in th peace in paradise. i felt a feeling of remorse in this one.some day all of us will fly but lets enjoy of the ground first. love it.~nb