Monday, October 27, 2014

Painting Comments

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' I painted the walls today, '
shades of earth tones
bright was the eyes, yet dull the potters clay
smooth the foundation with a touch of rosey red
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Myrtle Thomas
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 27 October 2014

This poem is painted with the grave mood tinge of sadness - without confidence in myself as I feel vanity even in these eyes

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