Sunday, June 7, 2009

Painting Comments

Rating: 4.9

I'm drawing a circle,
Which is concentrically diminishing,
With each gliding of the pencil on the paper,
Until it becomes a spiral.
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Marieta Maglas
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Ramesh T A 06 November 2015

Diminishing concentric circles rising high as a spiral to spiritual state by the touch of love!

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 15 October 2010

Romantic Geometry in befitting metaphors Say Wow! ... thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Marieta Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 12 January 2010

nicely penned here! wow, you are good!

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Melody Song 10 December 2009

Wonderful poem... I really liked the symbolism Thank you for sharing

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Eyan Desir 10 November 2009

Well this was painted wonderfully...

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Terri Turrell 09 November 2009

as both a poet and an artist I have to say I really like where you go with this poem. very nice symble-ism!

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Marieta Maglas 03 November 2009

From: Dick Badian (Netherlands ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 11/2/2009 6: 52: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: forever yours hello Marietta. I promise i will get deeper in your work. I sniffed arround.saw some beautifull pieces.so as soon as i can find more time I will dive into your thoughts. kind regards stuiterdick

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Margaret Donaghy 30 October 2009

passsionate feelings of his vision... 10

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Sarah Franks 28 October 2009

its amazing i love it. its a beautiful writting and the theme is wonderful 10+

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Mark Wahlberg 28 October 2009

you have painted the painting in such an natural way 10

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Roxane Sarandon 25 October 2009

passsionate feelings of his vision...........

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HaZeM PaKKaR 20 October 2009

you could simply draw a funny painting.. i like the way you use your words/brush.. i will read it again and enjoy it more.. thanks4sharing! !

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Marieta Maglas 20 October 2009

From: Dona Lil Antonio (Manila Philippines; Female; 29) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 10/19/2009 12: 19: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: hi ive gone through your poems they were all awesome and written in deep feelings. keep writing and keep inspiring others to make good crafts as well.

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Sandra Martyres 20 October 2009

Beautiful verse you have created here Mari with your concentric circles diminishing as the poem comes to life...10+++

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Vidi Writes 18 October 2009

Diminishing circle and his spiral face Diminishing eyes, so is the wink on his face Elliptical lips and his irresistible words Enlarged heart stands a witness to union of souls. No wonder, such an inspiration has brought out this poem Smooth, silky feelings and paintings have drawn a forum Good read.

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Marieta Maglas 18 October 2009

From: Alan Draper (Braunton, Devon United Kingdom; Male; 54) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 10/18/2009 9: 17: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Thanks Mari I've read your poems. You have good imagination but the poems are too serious for me. Maybe thats the way in Romania. It does have a sad reputation to us Westerners. I love laughing and challenge you to write a funny poem to make me happy. Lots of luck from your Froggie friend Alan

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Jimmy Reed 18 October 2009

These verses are written so beautifully............10

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Roy Martinez 16 October 2009

Very poetic way of expressing your feelings and demarcation of set goals.............

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Gwenda Madison 09 October 2009

I can well imagine the way you have touched life playing with the circles; leading one into another to harvest the uncontrollable soul as one.

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Jessica Hoffman 09 October 2009

You have captured the very soul of poetry in your lines..........10

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Marieta Maglas

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Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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