I'm drawing a circle,
Which is concentrically diminishing,
With each gliding of the pencil on the paper,
Until it becomes a spiral.
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Romantic Geometry in befitting metaphors Say Wow! ... thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Marieta Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
Wonderful poem... I really liked the symbolism Thank you for sharing
as both a poet and an artist I have to say I really like where you go with this poem. very nice symble-ism!
From: Dick Badian (Netherlands ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 11/2/2009 6: 52: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: forever yours hello Marietta. I promise i will get deeper in your work. I sniffed arround.saw some beautifull pieces.so as soon as i can find more time I will dive into your thoughts. kind regards stuiterdick
its amazing i love it. its a beautiful writting and the theme is wonderful 10+
you could simply draw a funny painting.. i like the way you use your words/brush.. i will read it again and enjoy it more.. thanks4sharing! !
From: Dona Lil Antonio (Manila Philippines; Female; 29) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 10/19/2009 12: 19: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: hi ive gone through your poems they were all awesome and written in deep feelings. keep writing and keep inspiring others to make good crafts as well.
Beautiful verse you have created here Mari with your concentric circles diminishing as the poem comes to life...10+++
Diminishing circle and his spiral face Diminishing eyes, so is the wink on his face Elliptical lips and his irresistible words Enlarged heart stands a witness to union of souls. No wonder, such an inspiration has brought out this poem Smooth, silky feelings and paintings have drawn a forum Good read.
From: Alan Draper (Braunton, Devon United Kingdom; Male; 54) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 10/18/2009 9: 17: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Thanks Mari I've read your poems. You have good imagination but the poems are too serious for me. Maybe thats the way in Romania. It does have a sad reputation to us Westerners. I love laughing and challenge you to write a funny poem to make me happy. Lots of luck from your Froggie friend Alan
Very poetic way of expressing your feelings and demarcation of set goals.............
I can well imagine the way you have touched life playing with the circles; leading one into another to harvest the uncontrollable soul as one.
You have captured the very soul of poetry in your lines..........10
Diminishing concentric circles rising high as a spiral to spiritual state by the touch of love!