painting was painted
and hanged on the wall
people are entering
the exhibition is on
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Very touching. But at least the painting was appreciated. Excellent.A ten for your sensitivity. Warm regards, Sandra
A rare concept...again u have touched a theme thats trivia for many...and exelled with ur compassionate mind.
I recomend this with an 8 because it has some good lines I like. But I also will take this opportunity to illustrate what I meant by too many words and lines not needed. ' People are entering and The exhibition is on ', and the fact that the PAINTER is ' standing in the corner.' None of these words or lines are relevant to the poem. GW62
nice picture u have painted asif--the canvas will be the admiration of many. +10 regards anjali
Painter speaks volumes of meanings though short. Thanks for your nice comment on my poem Grief. Best Wishes................
Though a very small poem it has great depths....great idea, very well rendered...10
very deep thought...for any artist the worse insult is to be misunderstood...its demeaning and heartbreaking! ...tears do indeed flow.well done
Lovely poem with a deep inner meaning.A painter's soul is the painting itself, the colours on the canvas.A 10!
different meanings on different visions...the painting is one and the same...the 'Painter' may be musing only over the viewer's ignorance...you give up crying...10
thank you sir for your kind concern...as far as i know poets have no religion they have only one religion and every poet knows which is that...sir plzz do read it again and try to understand wat poem is saying....thanks regards Asif Balouch
everyone is watching and have an idea of there own the true meaning of painting is lost and gone Great Words Well Done
an excellent poem. When we write out poems its the same. Others look at the words yet see something different then what we mean. Everyone interrupts what they see and read in their own way.
this poem is magnificent- you have a true potential and talent in poetry
I love this poem like anything- 'the true meaning of painting is lost and gone' Sometimes like our poems also! A splendid job is done. It is a moving composition of emotion. Added only a single 10 to it.
It's arts, where meanings are based on the audiences. Subjectivity is unavoidable. Poor painter, if he wants the meaning to be rigid according to his own manifestation. But yes, at least the painting is appreciated.