Monday, June 9, 2008

Painted Sunset Comments

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Slowly it flows onto my canvas
A trickle in a myriad hues
Of yellow and orange among the blues
Purple, violet, pink and indigo.
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Irene C S ClarkHogg
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Ben Gieske 04 August 2009

I like the slow rhymic reading of this poem especially in the first stanza. It fits in nicely with 'trickle' in a myriad hues. The beginning word, 'Slowly', sets up the correct pace and 'slow' at the end reinforces this.

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