Friday, September 28, 2012

Painted Faces Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pretty smiles on a
Face with dimples on the cheeks
Like a red rose blossom
Fresh, lively and a marvel
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Solomon Kobela
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Asif Andalib 28 September 2012

Good poem. I like the first stanza and the following Deep in the eyes Tears begun to congregate All in the name of pain Yet; you painted your face happy

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