Friday, May 1, 2009

Painted Canvass Comments

Rating: 5.0

A canvass was given to me
one that has already felt the touch
from coarse bristles not of my hand that held it
it was meant to be untouched ere I could touch it
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Elbert Matt Loubser
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Darrin Mcmiller Jr. 09 July 2010

Every man should have his own canvas, Every man his own thoughts to direct his own destiny. I can't be certain this is at least one message at the heart of this poem, but to be certain these are my own thoughts. Excellent Poem, Instant Favorite.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 17 June 2009

Life is like a painting.We're the painter and every stroke is our leading path.Great job Elbert!

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Anjali Sinha 11 May 2009

beautiful can I touch my fingers on your canvas too? awesome write -10 anjali

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